Personal Statement Feedback Please

[deleted1094650]

Hi everyone! Would anyone be willing to read over and provide feedback on my personal statement? I am most likely going to be re-applying this next cycle so I would appreciate if somebody could look at my existing personal statement and then give me pointers on how to improve it or if I should just create a new one.

Thank you!

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[lumya]

Hi, I'm willing to look over your personal statement. DM me a google docs link and I'll get back to you within 48 hours.