Personal Statement Feedback please!!

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Snowflake10

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Hi, this is my first time writing a personal statement, and I would really like some sort of feedback/criticism about it! Is anyone willing to read it for me?

Thanks in advance!
 
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you really should be careful on sending something like your ps to people online who you don't know, and could possibly steal your ideas.
 
sure thing, try sending it to your friends that you know are already in professional schools or have written their ps before, family members, your profs, etc. People you trust at least haha, best of luck!