Personal Statement Feedback

[DoctorSparkles]

Would anybody be willing to read my personal statement and provide feedback? I've asked some friends for feedback but none of them have applied to medical school so I was hoping to get some feedback from someone who understands what med schools are looking for.
Thanks!

 

[chilly_md]

You could look at the below thread where posters have volunteered to read and provide feedback on personal statements:

Forum Members - *~*~*~*~*~*Official Personal Statement Guide and Reader List 2022-2023*~*~*~*~*~*

It's that time of year again! This thread is for applicants who are writing, revising, and polishing their personal statement for the 2022-2023 application cycle! Like in prior years, this thread will be self-regulated. When volunteering as a reader (or contacting a reader for assistance)...

forums.studentdoctor.net

 

[DoctorSparkles]

You could look at the below thread where posters have volunteered to read and provide feedback on personal statements:

Forum Members - *~*~*~*~*~*Official Personal Statement Guide and Reader List 2022-2023*~*~*~*~*~*

It's that time of year again! This thread is for applicants who are writing, revising, and polishing their personal statement for the 2022-2023 application cycle! Like in prior years, this thread will be self-regulated. When volunteering as a reader (or contacting a reader for assistance)...

forums.studentdoctor.net

Thank you! couldn't find that thread anywhere!