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Hello,
I have just written a first draft of my personal statement. It's very rough and probably cringe-worthy at this point. If anyone has constructive feedback, I would really appreciate it! The more feedback I can get, the better it will be.
One side-note.. I was approved for the fee assistance program so I have to submit my application by July 11th (5 days from now). I'm also taking the DAT on July 11th so I'm kind of freaking out. Would it be worth it to send the personal statement in to a professional editing service?
Here it is: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oyuzQC1APtPg47zObLyNtV8NuqMxD6UiPwrb-dB6Hwo/edit?usp=sharing
I have just written a first draft of my personal statement. It's very rough and probably cringe-worthy at this point. If anyone has constructive feedback, I would really appreciate it! The more feedback I can get, the better it will be.
One side-note.. I was approved for the fee assistance program so I have to submit my application by July 11th (5 days from now). I'm also taking the DAT on July 11th so I'm kind of freaking out. Would it be worth it to send the personal statement in to a professional editing service?
Here it is: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oyuzQC1APtPg47zObLyNtV8NuqMxD6UiPwrb-dB6Hwo/edit?usp=sharing