Personal statement help!

Started by luftfaust
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luftfaust

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Hi all,

I'm about to submit my primary application, and wanted to get a feedback on my personal statement.

I've actually had a couple of people read over it. While I had mostly positive feedback, their suggestions were not very specific. So I thought I'd take some time to read/edit it over this weekend and try to get more people take a look at it.

Would anyone be able to comment on my PS? If you could post a reply here, I will PM you the essay.

Thank you in advance!