Personal Statement Help

[Mooseforkicks]

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I was wondering if anyone had some time this weekend to look over my personal statement? I’ve done some editing, but all my feedback so far has been from people who aren’t really objective. Thanks!

 

[ArteryStudyPainting]

Go for it!

 

[Mooseforkicks]

I’ll PM you

 

[imaballer023]

I can look at it!


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[Mr. Babe]

PM me

 

[LoveBeingHuman:)]

Sure!

 

[frosted2]

I'll take a look at it as well 🙂
What specifically are you looking for? Feedback on grammar, content, or both?

 

[lovehate]

Pm me

 

[chemist13579]

PM me

Would you mind looking over mine as well? I just rewrote it and I'm not sure if I made it better or worse...

 

[coramDeo]

I would love to take a look!

 

[AllBleedingStops]

Sure

 

[Mr. Babe]

Would you mind looking over mine as well? I just rewrote it and I'm not sure if I made it better or worse...

yea send it on over

 

[PhilzCoffeeAddict]

I'm free to look some over. Pm me!

 

[jdrb0130]

I know this is OP's forum but is anyone willing to look over mine as well?

 

[TakemePRN]

I know this is OP's forum but is anyone willing to look over mine as well?

Sure. PM me a google doc and I can read it for you

 

[JonathanHusky]

I know this is OP's forum but is anyone willing to look over mine as well?

sure thing! 🙂

 

[jdrb0130]

sure thing! 🙂

Thanks I just sent PM

 

[Dhooy7]

Anyone willing to look over mine as well? Thanks!

 

[boogiecousins94]

anyone can pm me I don't mind looking at some too

 

[Detective SnowBucket]

@jdrb0130 @Dhooy7 @Mooseforkicks I'd love to take a look at them all

 

[Dhooy7]

@jdrb0130 @Dhooy7 @Mooseforkicks I'd love to take a look at them all

Ok. Thanks! I need to edit it first.

 

[ssmd22]

Anyone can PM me, I'd be happy to look at some.

 

[jdrb0130]

I have to edit mine as well and will send it over after.. Thank you!! 🙂

 

[892002]

If anyone needs another pair of eyes, feel free to PM me!

 

[Mooseforkicks]

I’ve made some pretty substantial edits to my personal statement in the last few months. Would anyone be willing to give me feedback my new draft?

 

[Detective SnowBucket]

I’ve made some pretty substantial edits to my personal statement in the last few months. Would anyone be willing to give me feedback my new draft?

I can take a look.

 

[Mooseforkicks]

I’ll PM you