personal statement help?

[lilnoelle]

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Anyone feel like reading my personal statement and giving pointers? I just finished my first draft and will be sending it to my sister to edit. (She used to work as an editor for a magazine) She'll help me with the format, prose, etc, but I'd like to have someone in psych read it too.
Its short (about a page).
I'm applying for Med Psych.

Thanks!