Personal Statement help

[Ineverlosefocus]

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I was wondering if there was anybody that might be able to assist me with my personal statement. I think I like it as is but it seems relatively heavy on the personal story/experiences rather than accomplishments.

I guess what I'm asking, would anybody have the time to take a look at it and give me some criticism?

Thank you in advance.

 

[Ineverlosefocus]

or even recommend a place or service that might be able to help.

 

[cabinbuilder]

I was wondering if there was anybody that might be able to assist me with my personal statement. I think I like it as is but it seems relatively heavy on the personal story/experiences rather than accomplishments.

I guess what I'm asking, would anybody have the time to take a look at it and give me some criticism?

Thank you in advance.

Yes, send me your statement. I LOVE doing essays and have done many for students over the years. Just be available via email to answer questions as I like to be quick about it.

 

[catswym]

there is a dedicated thread for this reason.

 

[Ineverlosefocus]

there is a dedicated thread for this reason.

ahh thank you so much catswym.