Personal Statement - Need feedback

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BasilDancingCheese

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Hello,

Any bored members out there who could give a feedback on a personal statement? I feel as though I have made it into a final draft as much as I can. However, if I can get some feedback (positive or negative) on grammar (ESL), flow, and just about anything else. It will be much appreciated!
 
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