Personal Statement proofread

[Lorioj]

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I know it's a little late in the game, but I'm trying to get some quick feedback on my personal statement before I e-submit.
Is there anyone that's not too busy and that wouldn't mind giving my P.S. a quick read and providing some criticism?
It doesn't have to be anything profound, just maybe some small grammar or content comments.
I've gone over it and over it, and could use a fresh set of eyes.
Either email or pm are fine.
Thanks in advance.

 

[kbv]

Do you understand you are taking a risk? If yes, post this in pharmacy forum-better chance to be read.

 

[fenixtnlfan]

This thread has a list of proofreaders us Mods recommend you use.
http://forums.studentdoctor.net/showthread.php?t=534303

Remember, this is a public, anonymous forum so you don't just want to send it out to anyone. They could likely steal your statement.