Personal Statement Question: Weak Semester

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I read the following advice in an SDN personal statement thread from a few years ago:

"Remember to address any insufficiencies or lapses in your grades (or any major weaknesses in your application)"

I would like to ask about that. I already wrote my personal statement, it flows well and tells a story. Now, I do have a very weak semester. In my sophomore year (I was at a community college back then), I got a W, a C, and a D (in physics). This poor performance was because I was immature and thought I would get by without studying. After that bad semester, I learned my lesson, got straight A's the following semester, was on the dean's list for the majority of subsequent semesters, and went on to earn a degree in Engineering.

I think the upward trend of my grades speaks for itself, and obviously I mastered Physics (not only did I get an A the following semester, but I went on to graduate in Engineering).

Do I have to explain this lapse in performance in my personal statement? As of now, my statement flows well, and inserting an explanation of my bad semester would break up the flow and sound awkward in my opinion. Also, does my increased performance indeed speak for itself, or do I have to explain it? I would be more than happy to write about it, I most certainly learned an invaluable lesson from this experience, but is the personal statement the appropriate place to write about it? [For instance, I can discuss it in my secondaries, but will I even get secondaries if I don't explain this in my personal statement.]
 
I read the following advice in an SDN personal statement thread from a few years ago:

"Remember to address any insufficiencies or lapses in your grades (or any major weaknesses in your application)"

I would like to ask about that. I already wrote my personal statement, it flows well and tells a story. Now, I do have a very weak semester. In my sophomore year (I was at a community college back then), I got a W, a C, and a D (in physics). This poor performance was because I was immature and thought I would get by without studying. After that bad semester, I learned my lesson, got straight A's the following semester, was on the dean's list for the majority of subsequent semesters, and went on to earn a degree in Engineering.

I think the upward trend of my grades speaks for itself, and obviously I mastered Physics (not only did I get an A the following semester, but I went on to graduate in Engineering).

Do I have to explain this lapse in performance in my personal statement? As of now, my statement flows well, and inserting an explanation of my bad semester would break up the flow and sound awkward in my opinion. Also, does my increased performance indeed speak for itself, or do I have to explain it? I would be more than happy to write about it, I most certainly learned an invaluable lesson from this experience, but is the personal statement the appropriate place to write about it? [For instance, I can discuss it in my secondaries, but will I even get secondaries if I don't explain this in my personal statement.]
I agree with the first reply. Unless grades was something you struggled with during your time in college/grad school and it affected your mindset on going to med school, I really wouldn't talk about that in you personal statement. Grades came up during one of my interviews, and it wasn't that big of a deal..upward trends are good; they'll pick up on that. What you really want, in the end, is after you finish reading your PS, have an idea/explanation of why you should be a doctor/go to medical school. Maybe it's something you did or experienced or just about your life in general....don't worry about explaining your grades...there will be secondaries and interviews to explain all that. Just write a PS that tells a story, your story, and you should be fine as far as the PS goes.
 
Thank you so much for the valuable advice!
 
Whoever said to address this stuff in a personal statement is trying to prevent their competition from getting into school... It is not the place to discuss shortcomings, only to address why you want to go to medical school!
 
Others much more qualified than I have already answered. But yeah, I was going to say that your transcript will tell the story of your grades, and if you improved, I don't think there's a need to discuss your weak semester in your PS.
 
Thank goodness. I had the same worries as OP.
 
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