Personal Statement reader for a very rough draft?

[JustWrenTime]

I've scanned most of the reader threads and couldn't find someone who is currently available. I was just wondering if someone would be able to read a very rough draft of my personal statement for medical school. I'm having trouble figuring out what I should write and whether it even works. Again, this is a very, very rough draft that I wish someone to give a cursory glance over. Any kind of advice would be awesome.
Thanks

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[bioboy23]

I’ll read it and give feedback. Just pm me

 

[lexington251]

Sure. pm me

 

[MCATISEZ]

Hey! I applied this cycle and was fortunate enough to get a couple offers. Just PM me and I’ll be happy to read it.

Good luck!


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[masnerj]

PM me and I'll be happy to read it!

 

[cloudcomputingunicorn]

PM me. Happy to read it too!

 

[NoMessEMS]

This thread is a little outdated, but I'm applying to some SMPs currently and I was wondering if someone might be interested in reading my personal statement, as well? I'm a nontraditional student. I've spent the last two years completing some DIY post-bacc work through the community college system, and I'm looking at SMPs to help my chances of getting into medical school (uGPA is in ruins). I've had it checked by a writing center for grammatical errors, but that's not to say that someone else won't find something they overlooked.

If you're interested, please PM me! It would be greatly appreciated!