Personal Statement Review

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  1. MarsDominus

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    Hi. I didn't get much luck at the pre-allo forum so I thought I'd ask for opinion here. Can you guys look at my personal statement and tell me what you think? Suggestions are more than welcome. I'm thinking of submitting it within the next 24 hours.

    Grammatical errors always escape me so please point them out in the Google doc link I will be providing to good samaritans.

    Thank you in advance!
     
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    I can take a look at it if you'd like! Just PM me the link...
     
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  4. hawkeye3211

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    I can as well.
     
  5. OHSDoc1993

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    Anyone willing to look at my personal statement? It's way too long right now and having trouble cutting stuff out while keeping the meat of the essay in there. Any extra eyes would be greatly appreciated!!
     
  6. nontrad78

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    I'd be willing to take a look also.

    I could take a look at your as well.

    PM me the link, and I'll take a look at them and get some feedback to you guys by tomorrow morning.
     
  7. nontrad78

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    Nevermind, just saw that your original post is a week old now. Here's hoping you already got the feedback you need and have already submitted.
     
  8. 99445

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    I can!
     
  9. kkosp2451

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    I can also!
     

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