Personal Statement Review?

[Plusle]

I was wondering if anybody who felt like their personal statement was good enough to get them into school would be kind of enough to revise mine? Any insights are helpful. I can pm or email.

 

[pms_testosterone]

If you're still looking, you can paste your personal statement into a pm to me.

 

[heartxoxo]

I can give it a read and give suggestions if you PM me

 

[AsianCakeBaker]

I'd be happy to read it. My think my P.S. was a big factor into getting accepted. PM if you wish.

 

[BRIGGSQUAD]

Yeah PM if you still need help I'd be glad to read it over.