Personal statement review ?

[tatixoxo11]

Would anyone be willing to give me opinion's on my personal statement thus far? I'm struggling to finish and I just fell that it could use a lot of work

 

[chilly_md]

I suggest reading the tips and guidelines provided in the below threads to help you make some modifications and finish a draft of your PS:

To Premeds: General Advice on Personal Statements

Okay, so I’m exhausted as heck but had a chance to go through about 10 personal statements recently, and I can say that here are some common issues that we see in essays (as I’ve talked to peers, other admissions members, and the like): 1) Numero Uno: On SDN: If a reader says they are UNABLE...

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Depakote's Personal Statement Guide/Tips

First let me apologize to everyone that already submitted their AMCAS applications. Yes, it's late June, this is too late to help those of you that got your stuff in early. That said... STOP READING HERE IF YOU HAVE ALREADY SUBMITTED. There's no sense in looking for mistakes/beating yourself up...

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Then, I suggest reading the instructions in this thread to find a volunteer reader who can share their thoughts:

Forum Members - *~*~*~*~*~*Official Personal Statement Guide and Reader List 2023-2024*~*~*~*~*~*

It's that time of year again! This thread is for applicants who are writing, revising, and polishing their personal statement for the 2023-2024 application cycle! Like in prior years, this thread will be self-regulated. When volunteering as a reader (or contacting a reader for assistance)...

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