General Admissions & OTCAS Personal Statement

[futurelifechanger]

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I know a lot of people ask this but would anyone be willing to look at my personal statement? I applied to 6 schools last year and got reject from all 6 🙁 I'd really like to know if there are any tweaks I need to make to my personal statement to help me get accepted this year, although I'm not applying to the same schools I'm also wondering if I should just trash this one and write a new one. It would be very much appreciated if someone could just read over my personal statement!
Thanks!

 

[RUNNING_OT]

I know a lot of people ask this but would anyone be willing to look at my personal statement? I applied to 6 schools last year and got reject from all 6 🙁 I'd really like to know if there are any tweaks I need to make to my personal statement to help me get accepted this year, although I'm not applying to the same schools I'm also wondering if I should just trash this one and write a new one. It would be very much appreciated if someone could just read over my personal statement!
Thanks!

Hey! I have read about 5 other personal statements so I would be happy to look yours over 🙂

 

[futurelifechanger]

Hey! I have read about 5 other personal statements so I would be happy to look yours over 🙂

Awesome! thanks so much! I'll send you a private message

 

[OTgirl29]

I know a lot of people ask this but would anyone be willing to look at my personal statement? I applied to 6 schools last year and got reject from all 6 🙁 I'd really like to know if there are any tweaks I need to make to my personal statement to help me get accepted this year, although I'm not applying to the same schools I'm also wondering if I should just trash this one and write a new one. It would be very much appreciated if someone could just read over my personal statement!
Thanks!

Id be happy to look over it as well. I was in your shoes once. First time I got rejected from many schools, second time accepted to many and I believe it was my personal statement changes that got me in 🙂

 

[futurelifechanger]

Id be happy to look over it as well. I was in your shoes once. First time I got rejected from many schools, second time accepted to many and I believe it was my personal statement changes that got me in 🙂

Thanks! I'll send you a personal message as well!

 

[csulbhssa2009]

hi! I am in the process of applying for the first time. Would you guys be able to read over my PS as well?

 

[RUNNING_OT]

hi! I am in the process of applying for the first time. Would you guys be able to read over my PS as well?

I can read it and give you some feedback 🙂

 

[sydneylibra]

Hey! I have read about 5 other personal statements so I would be happy to look yours over 🙂

Hi there! I recently got rejected by the schools that I applied to (and still waiting for one, but at this point I doubt I'll get in)! Do you mind reading over my personal statement and give me feedback on it? I would really really appreciate it! 🙂

 

[RUNNING_OT]

Hi there! I recently got rejected by the schools that I applied to (and still waiting for one, but at this point I doubt I'll get in)! Do you mind reading over my personal statement and give me feedback on it? I would really really appreciate it! 🙂

Yeah. Just DM me. I am on spring break next week so I have time.