Personal statement

[psychedforpsych1$]

Would anyone mind critiquing my personal statement?

 

[M&L]

As long as you are comfortable with me NOT correcting it (i am just trying to not cross any lines). I can just give you overall impression.

 

[psychedforpsych1$]

As long as you are comfortable with me NOT correcting it (i am just trying to not cross any lines). I can just give you overall impression.

That's completely fine. I'd just like to receive feedback on how it flows/ways I can make it improve. Can I pm you?

 

[M&L]

That's completely fine. I'd just like to receive feedback on how it flows/ways I can make it improve. Can I pm you?

Sure !

 

[ducks_are _the best]

Send it my way too if you would like!

 

[lumya]

I'm also willing to look it over!

 

[Skyrider2000]

Hello, Would anyone be able to look over my PS? thanks