Personal Statement

[PLPrincess]

Hello,
I was hoping to get a new set of eyes, that has already been through the application process, to help me with my personal statment. I think I have included everything I wanna say, however I would like someone to review it and just make some constructive criticism....If anyone is willing to help, please e-mail me or send me a PM. I had a couple people proof it, but I just want someone in the field or someone studying the field to see it.


Thanks!
Magdalena

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[PLPrincess]

Wow. I think its amazing that over 50 people viewed this post but only one offered to help. I thought this forum was to help others, express your opinions, and whatnot.

 

[JennyW]

Wow. I think its amazing that over 50 people viewed this post but only one offered to help. I thought this forum was to help others, express your opinions, and whatnot.

I sat on the admissions committee of an east coast school for 3 years. Send me your personal statement via private message, and I'll gladly review it.

Jenny

 

[samwY]

I sat on the admissions committee of an east coast school for 3 years. Send me your personal statement via private message, and I'll gladly review it.

Jenny

huh? you want an eye transplant? thats possible?

 

[PLPrincess]

huh? you want an eye transplant? thats possible?

funny....

looking for help, not wiseass comments....

 

[I-Ball]

I think the reason you're not getting as much help as you would've liked is because most of us are reading everything but can't help because we're in the same boat you are (ie. moi). Anyways good luck! Writing these apps sucks!

-I Ball