I would also like to solicit some help from current vet students... I just need to know if the initial section makes me seem more human, or if it's just distracting.
Hah you're braver than I am.... I was thinking it'd be nice to offer to read it but biochem is my world at the moment, and I don't want to give crappy or half-assed advice. But you've probably read past lecture 9 at this point, me not so much.... 🙄
Email to send to? You can PM me rather than post here.
My main problem is that I'm getting dissenting opinions on what to include... I have two versions and I really don't know what to take and what to get rid of. So, I might send two versions - pick your favorite and proofread it. Lol.