personal statment help

[Ramil]

can anyone please read my personal statement and let me know how it is...thank you so much.

 

[amalgamgrillz]

sure, i'll give you my first impression of it..pm it to me?

 

[Kkae]

U can pm me if u'd like a second opinion.

 

[polarmolar]

pm it and I can read it over for you if you like

 

[indpndntrd]

PM me.. I would love to read it over for you

 

[Pat Kelly]

Pm

 

[iamlegend]

I would love to. If you want me too. Looks like I'm in line.