So I decided to be proactive and get the jump on my primaries and secondaries for next year (COVID delay). Writing is a personal weakness of mine, so I have to work on these things well in advance. I sent my drafts out to a couple of reviewers and i got a mix of feedback ranging from its great (don't trust this person anymore lol) to its terrible (i have good ECs) and I need to establish a narrative via "show don't tell" (absolutely despise this rule lol). Is there anyone willing to review my primary? Also: does this "show don't tell" rule apply to secondaries as well? From what I saw it seems that the ADCOMS want a straightforward answer for some of their prompts rather than a story/narrative. BONUS: If there are any veterans applying now or successfully applied in the past, how did you establish your narrative? I don't know how to make my duties sound flowery at all.