plz proof anesthesia personal statement

[lluvia2rain]

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Well I caved in and paid someone to proof/structure my personal statement. He did a horrible job (4 changes in all, with two paragraphs moved). I found mistakes after he emailed his revisions. Oh and his changes made my crappppy essay even worse. Since I am already out some money I was hoping some kind people would help look over my essay to proof it. I want to get these applications out soon.

 

[Coastie]

Send it via PM.

 

[amyl]

hey -- i was considering doing the same thing. would you share which service did a bad job? -- pm me please if you don't want to post it publically. ii'll look at it too if you want but i am a ms IV with no more idea than you ;-)

 

[Ferdie]

why not just have a friend look it over for you?

 

[amyl]

they seem as clueless as i am.