Post Bacc Personal statement

[Bestofme]

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Hello, I need guidance regarding Personal Statement.
Heres my scenario :
My goal is medicine but I have low GPA so applying to Masters program. Health issues destroyed my GPA but is also the major reason I became motivated towards medicine. Is anyone willing to read and critique on my rough draft? I want honest advice about the content and also my writing skills that aren't great. The essay needs to be limited to 500 words only. I want specific advice on what to edit and cut out since I have one and half page long essay.
I really appreciate your help in this matter.

 

[yourethewurst]

I can probably help you edit your essay. I can't guarantee that it's going to get you in anywhere, but I will say that I can help you hone you down to what you should be conveying in the essay and at least try to help you get your point across. It took me a long time to get the ball rolling with my personal statements-- but I eventually narrowed it down to something. 🙂 Good luck!

 

[Bestofme]

Hey, Thank you so much. I really appreciate your help. I am still editing but I will soon send the draft to you. Also, Im new to SDN forum so where do I upload the draft? I do not want to upload file here since it will be visible to all. Please let me know. Thanks!

 

[yourethewurst]

Just PM ME

 

[ucsbfuturemd]

Hi, I'd be happy to take a look at it as well if you want to PM me.
I was hoping I could get some feedback on my first draft as well. If anyone is willing to look at it I would really appreciate it!