Proudest accomplishment feedback

[LargeTortoise]

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[sarcasmrules]

Accomplishment or personal accomplishment?

 

[LargeTortoise]

Accomplishment or personal accomplishment?

Just accomplishment. I'm assuming the examples I gave aren't examples of personal accomplishments?

 

[Mr.Smile12]

Agreeing with the first response: it should focus on YOUR achievements. As an advisor, I appreciate sharing in other peoples' successes, but of the three proposed topics, #3 better addresses the prompt, though you may want to focus on the work you did to make the team in the first place.

For some people, it's graduating high school, especially first in the family... or perhaps you were on the verge of failing. Use that as a standard. Think of accomplishments that defined you or your character/personality/confidence.

 

[deleted929944]

Just accomplishment. I'm assuming the examples I gave aren't examples of personal accomplishments?

Anyone of those prompts can be re/phrased as YOUR personal accomplishments depending on how well you can write. Take #1: Helping/Guiding your roommate is YOUR achievement from the perspective of a counselor, mentor, and friend. It is also roommate's achievement. To discount your achievement would also be similar to discounting the achievement of counselors, social workers, therapist who help other to overcome life's issues. Sometime compassion isn't enough. You took the effort to go the extra step. Be proud of that accomplishment.