PS proofread?

[dsony2284]

Hi guys, i was wondering if someone would be willing to proofread my PS. I am reapplying this cycle and want to see what people think of my PS from the previous cycle.

Please add what i could improve on and maybe where i can add certain aspects like new coursework etc and what to include as new improvements in the app process. I am currently pending for acceptance into a masters program, maybe adding that in there will be useful

Thanks.

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[doc3232]

sure.

 

[dente per dente]

would be glad to.

 

[waitingame]

Anyone else willing to do the same for mine?

 

[doc toothache]

Anyone else willing to do the same for mine?

See your pm.

 

[DrReo]

you bet!

 

[Tooth Fairy 101]

sure!

 

[Zerconia2921]

i ll read it shoot a pm