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Hi everyone,
I'm on my third draft of my personal statement -- working on it now because I want to focus on MCAT and my one remaining pre-med course in the spring, and would like to give this enough time to get as solid as possible.
I feel stuck in a rut and like I'm too close to the story to tell if I'm getting my point across. Would anyone mind taking a look at it and giving me feedback on structure/content/clarity?
Thank you in advance!
EDIT: It's also about 1000 characters too long, and I am trouble finding things to cut. Any tips in that arena would be very appreciated!
I'm on my third draft of my personal statement -- working on it now because I want to focus on MCAT and my one remaining pre-med course in the spring, and would like to give this enough time to get as solid as possible.
I feel stuck in a rut and like I'm too close to the story to tell if I'm getting my point across. Would anyone mind taking a look at it and giving me feedback on structure/content/clarity?
Thank you in advance!
EDIT: It's also about 1000 characters too long, and I am trouble finding things to cut. Any tips in that arena would be very appreciated!
