PTCAS Essay feedback

[GAJID]

Hello, I just finished the first draft of my PTCAS application essay and I'm wondering if anyone out there could take a quick look to give me some feedback/let me know if I'm on the right track or if I need to totally change directions!

Thanks!

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[qtran]

pm me the essay ill read it and give u my opinionated feedback.

 

[dhc1]

pm me also and I'll take a look!

 

[GAJID]

Just sent PMs, thanks for the help!