PTCAS personal statement

[forty two]

Hi!
Could someone help edit my first draft of my personal statement. I haven't completely finished it, but I would like some advice from what I have now. I can't seem to figure out how to conclude it really well. So any further questions about anything or suggestions would really help!

Thanks!

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[Muscles00GT]

shoot it over to me via PM... ill take a look