Review my entire written application?

[907914]

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Over the last several weeks I have been refining my PS and W/A section. I have had about a dozen people review around ten drafts of my PS and think it is almost as good as it is going to get. Along with that, I have finished categorizing and describing all of my activities.

Tl;dr - Would anyone mind reviewing both my PS and W/A draft?

 

[squids82]

I can do it Thursday night if you would be ok with waiting until then. I’m not an ADCOM though so it might not be the exact quality of advice you’d want.

 

[dodolol21]

Sure, I'd be happy to. PM me a google doc where I can make comments/suggestions. Include school lists/stats

 

[djsbaseball2014]

Will also take a look, PM

 

[givesumacceptpls]

I can take a look

 

[Medic741]

Over the last several weeks I have been refining my PS and W/A section. I have had about a dozen people review around ten drafts of my PS and think it is almost as good as it is going to get. Along with that, I have finished categorizing and describing all of my activities.

Tl;dr - Would anyone mind reviewing both my PS and W/A draft?

For a prior service person I’d be more than happy to.

 

[thegoatis11]

Sure, I'd be happy to. PM me a google doc where I can make comments/suggestions. Include school lists/stats

Same for me!

 

[907914]

Thank you all! I will send out PMs later tonight!

 

[JIMMYJOHNivy]

Thank you all! I will send out PMs later tonight!

Glad to give my thoughts. Feel free to PM me!

 

[907914]

Glad to give my thoughts. Feel free to PM me!

Righteousness. Again, thanks all. PMs sent your (you all) way!

 

[deleted962973]

Would be happy to help if you want another pair of eyes! Make sure you send the doc in editing/suggestions mode. P sure my PMs are open

 

[907914]

Would be happy to help if you want another pair of eyes! Make sure you send the doc in editing/suggestions mode. P sure my PMs are open

Your PMs are not open. I would still greatly appreciate the help if you wanted to send me one.

 

[deleted962973]

Your PMs are not open. I would still greatly appreciate the help if you wanted to send me one.

Wow lol let me try to fix that in my settings. If not I’ll send you one

 

[lalalallala]

I will read your app if you want