review my personal statement?

[DanNuch]

hi, i am just finishing up my PS and looking for some feedback. I had a lot of ideas and i would like to make sure the messages come across in an understandable fashion.

if you would let me know i can send it to you. and please, be brutally honest, id rather have you tear it apart than the ad coms. let me know if you think there is something im missing or there is anything i included thats unnecessary.

thanks so much in advance, i really appreciate it

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[Sephisabin]

I'll look it over Dan, just PM it to me.

 

[dentalgal3123]

i don't mind giving you some feedback
pm me

 

[TarheelKid24]

I don't mind reading it over it either...Just PM me.