secondary essay style question?

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difficult to say without reading it.

my style was more direct and non-narrative.

I don't think it has to be unemotional.

The key is balance, and not to be overly flowery. If you can take out the word but still get essentially the same thing across, do it

yes, I appreciate the irony of such advice from me
 
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