Secondary Essay wording?

[bluemamba7]

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For secondaries, does flowery language matter, or should it be more concise?

 

[bluepeony]

No point in worrying about it now if you've already submitted. In the future, you can run it through grammarly before submitting.

 

[Engrailed]

For those who use Grammarly, is it mostly correct all the time? I feel like it tries too hard to add commas.. at least in my experience

 

[Engrailed]

They're reading through thousands of essays and not analyzing every single word so I think youll be fine 🙂

 

[Engrailed]

I dont remember who on this forum said it, but someone also said recently that adcoms are not "deeply analyzing" the timestamps on secondaries either. and I totally agree. Just sending you all positive energy! good luck

 

[Cornfed101]

For those who use Grammarly, is it mostly correct all the time? I feel like it tries too hard to add commas.. at least in my experience

I’ve found it to be pretty good. You just have to not trust everything it suggests. Not ready for robot overlords yet