Sharing Personal Statements

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I am reapplying this cycle and I am completely stuck on writing my new personal statement. Is there anyone who has reapplied that is willing to share their personal statement with me? I need something to spark some ideas..

 

[Mrbubbles]

to be honest, u shouldn't have to change much .. i kept like 70% of my first personal statement, cuz my passion and reasons for choosing dentistry has not changed in the pass year.. i only addressed how i've become MORE passionate followed by dentistry related experiences/examples (i'm sure u have been doing dental related stuff to boost ur resume and make u look like a stronger applicant ) ..

so...u should do hte same..now go brainstorm! reading others may spark some ideas but it comes down to you to make it enjoyable to the reader and reveal your true self..interviewers are trained to see if u bull****ed ur way thru ur personal statement and if u are as genuiune as u sound in ur essay..

good luck

 

[g0forkurself]

The only source of inspiration for your personal statement should come from yourself. Plus, a genuinely true personal statement is better than a borrowed one any day in my opinion.

 

[doc toothache]

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[anilpank]

Yes,
You don't have to change your personal statement. You just have to change the style.
I advice you to take some professional help this time. Try http://essayauthors.com/

 

[setdoc7]

I read about 100 essays a year from GPR candidates. Here is what I find:
1. Improper use of English
2. Poor grammar
3. No focus
4. What will you do as a resident?

Something in your essay should demonstrate that you are serious about the challenges ahead and that you as a person are able to "get the job done". Use an example from your past where you were able to complete a particularly difficult task, and how you organized yourself to do it. It can give the reader some insight into you as a person.

Everyone reading your essay knows you want to be a dentist. Your job is to say why you will be a good one.

 

[doc toothache]

I read about 100 essays a year from GPR candidates. Here is what I find:
1. Improper use of English
2. Poor grammar
3. No focus
4. What will you do as a resident?

Sometimes 1/2 are the least of the problems in a ps.

 

[dentalmama]

I personally think it's important in the essay to describe some hardship you were able to conquer and how that strength will carry you through dental school! Also, be confident but not too boastful, (a bit of humility is good, in its place, to show you are real and have integrity). You have to dig deep, because demonstrating that you have the will to pursue your passion, even against difficult challenges, is an impressive statement, in my opinion. Good luck!