Stuck on personal statement :( Halp?

[redsorghum]

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Hey guys,

I've spent quite a bit of time on my personal statement and had writer's block for a few weeks so it's still unfinished (getting close though!). I'm starting to run out of time and some pointers would help me along.

Would any of you folks be able to spare the time to read over what I have so far and give some advice? I'm running out of characters for the conclusion and I'd like to cut out any "fluff". Also, if what I have is total crap, please let me know so I can do a complete rehaul instead of continue to waste time on it.

Thanks friends. 🙂

 

[redsorghum]

I'd be happy to to give it a look over if you want. Just message me 🙂

Thank you a ton!

 

[AvacadosAtLaw]

I can also take a look at it.

 

[TheRealRealSlimShady]

I can take a look at it for you tomorrow! A fresh pair of eyes always helps

 

[redsorghum]

Wow you guys are all so sweet! n_n @Dedzo99's comments were very useful! I am making a few tweaks and will send it to you guys to read while I mull over how to conclude this thing...