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Suggestions on my personal statement

RLegend

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Nov 19, 2016
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Hey guys,

I just finished my first copy of my PS and was hoping that someone could read it over and give me some feedback. I want to be sure that I am approaching the essay correctly and answering the "why medicine" question effectively. Also, any feedback on style, grammar or how to shorten the essay would also be really appreciated. Feel free to be as brutal as you want.

I would be forever grateful for any help :bow::bow:
 
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