I wrote my personal statement and have been having some people look it over. My friend is a M3 so I figured he would know kinda what they are looking for and if my essay is sufficient. About 1/2 of my PS talks about being involved in the HIV community via outreach, taking courses, advocacy, etc even tho it states I an NOT HIV+. Hes worried that the topic may be too heavy to talk about as it is one that may be sensitive for the more conservative admissions members. I also talk about my involvement in the LGBT+ community through volunteering and mentorship but that is a smaller portion of the PS. He thinks its well written and overall its a good PS but is worried that it may turn people away due to HIV being such a stigmatized virus and some members may immediately discredit me because of it. I put my HIV Testing as a most meaningful experience along with my LGBT youth center so even if its not mentioned in my PS, it will appear in some form or another in my application. I know topics like religion, politics, and other controversial topics are emphasized as bas topic options, but do you think this will paint a bad picture as well?