Use of Contractions in PS

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Did any of you purposefully avoid the use of contractions when writing your PS? I read a thread on here in the last few days regarding a secondary essay where the school asked the student not to use contractions, but I haven't heard anything about the AMCAS PS.

I'm hoping a few people will answer and then let this thread sink to the bottom of the list (I'm sure most of you are tired of your PS and have already submitted it).
 
Alderon007 said:
Did any of you purposefully avoid the use of contractions when writing your PS? I read a thread on here in the last few days regarding a secondary essay where the school asked the student not to use contractions, but I haven't heard anything about the AMCAS PS.

I'm hoping a few people will answer and then let this thread sink to the bottom of the list (I'm sure most of you are tired of your PS and have already submitted it).

I made sure to avoid using contractions in my ps as well as in all of my secondaries. You want to sound as professional as possible. Other than your numbers, ps, and post-secondary experiences, the adcoms have no idea about who you are.
 
It's not a big deal. In fact, this has been debated before. It depends on your style. Contractions will often times make your essay more casual and conversational. It helps you to connect to your readers. This is a personal statement and not a research paper.

I used tons of them because it worked in my paper. It's me. It's how I write and it sounds okay. No problems. Most people really liked my essay. In fact, it was commented on by my interviewers that they enjoyed my essay, the style. So, I say relax and be yourself. If you are the type of person that wants to sound stuffy. i wanted to connect to them and make it real.

Even editors are divided on this. Truth is: Admissions folks are mostly concerned about content. They are not that worked up about this stuff, like we are.
 
Contractions = no shot in hell

AVOID USING CONTRACTIONS AT ALL COST. IF YOU CAN'T...sorry...CANNOT, THEN YOU WILL GET YOUR A$$ HANDED TO YOU
 
i didn't use contractions, but i kinda wish i would have. It does make an essay more reader-friendly.
sorry, the only advice I can offer is go with your gut!
 
someone should write their personal statement going out of the way not to use any normal contractions, yet using as many medical abbreviations as possible (like NPO, c, pt, etc.).
 
i think it depends on the writer and whether you are using the contraction to be lazy or because there is a particular style you are trying to write with. i mean...i began a sentence with "and" and used several contractions when i wrote my personal statement. Its probably grammatically incorrect but I wanted that particular section of my PS to feel like I was conversating with the reader and telling a story rather than reading like a science book. To me the personal statement was about telling a story about myself and making the reader feel comfortable with who i was. the best way to do that IMO is to be a bit more lax with the grammatically correct stuff. i mean you arent grammatically correct 100% of the time when you speak, right? no need to write like you have a stick up your a$$. i'm not saying to use a contraction every sentence and to start every sentence with "and" but i am saying that it is ok to use them sparingly and in sections where you feel it is warranted. it gives your personal statement a lighter more "personal" level type of tone, as if the reader knows you a little bit better.
 
Thanks guys, I appreciate the responses. I suppose I'll finish writing it before it gets too late, then look at it and ask myself I sound like someone interesting or a total slob. Good luck to you guys, I know at least I'll certainly need it.
 
I don't believe it will affect your application that much, as some people have already said that they used contractions in their essays with success. However, having an editor for a mother, I try to avoid contractions in formal writing, and I consider the med school PS to be formal. Call me stuffy. Also, in the words of my senior English teacher, "I realize that many great writers begin sentences with the word 'and.' When you are listed on the New York Times bestseller list, you too may begin sentences with 'and.' Until then, I will not accept it in your papers."
 
SpiritiualDuck said:
There's no current rule against starting a sentence with "and" or "but."

Ultimately, writers must, for the time being at least, decide for themselves which side of the debate they are on and either use or reject the construction accordingly. They must also consider whether or not their decision applies equally to the other coordinating conjunctions—for they are covered by the same rule.

There is much debate about the grammatical correctness of starting sentences with ‘and' and ‘but', though both words are now used to do so. Purists argue that the purpose of these coordinating conjunctions is to link related words, phrases or clauses within a sentence, and that their use is valid only when the link is not interrupted by a period. Those who argue that it is acceptable to use ‘and' and ‘but' at the beginning of sentences say that that interpretation is too literal. They often point to the fact that some great writers, including Shakespeare, have used ‘and' and ‘but' at the beginning of sentences, and that up to 40% of the words' usage in newspapers occurs at the beginning of sentences. They also point out that we commonly use ‘and' and ‘but' at the beginning of sentences in conversation.

Whatever view grammarians hold on the use of coordinating conjunctions at the beginning of sentences, they are almost universally opposed to the excessive use of the construction, and suggest it should be used infrequently. They appear to broadly agree that the excessive use of ‘and' or ‘but' at the beginning of sentences results in writing that is dull and monotonous


Is this some sort of joke? If it is, then I want to congratulate you on reaching the paramount of bullsh-tting ability, a height to which I aspire on a daily basis. If not, then, good lord: you are either a linguistics major, have way to much time on your hands, or could use a helping hand pulling that pole out of your ass. No offense intended, of course.

As for the OP, my rule of thumb (although completely unvalidated by prevailing 'grammarian' discourse, I'm sure) is too avoid contractions in formal writing (and principessa is correct--the PS is a formal written statement), UNLESS it makes the writing sound forced or choppy. You want your style to be professional but smooth--in writing and life.

As for DrThom--who in God's name do you think you are? How would you know anything about this process, as you have just submitted your AMCAS--much less any hard and fast rules. Ease up, my man.
 
SpiritiualDuck said:
Actually, I did study linguistics in college. And I have worked as a writer (note how my sentence began with "and"). In fact, I've won several national awards for my writing, scored a "T" on the MCAT, and I'm working on getting my first novel published.

To blindly follow these rules makes no sense. Many people believe we should not start a sentence with a coordinating conjunction because we were taught this in elementary school. However, this rule is completely unjustifiable. We were taught that coordinating conjunctions are used to hold together elements within a sentence. The truth is: Teachers discourage students from starting sentences with coordinating conjunctions because they are trying to avoid sentence fragments. If you start with a coordinating conjuction and your sentence is a complete sentence, it is grammatically correct.

And when it comes to your PS, it's about style, your style. Wait, it is about your style. You choose.


Holy sh-t, y'all! Spiritual Duck got a 'T' on the writing section of the MCAT! Congratu-fukin-lations, so did I.
Sorry, just thought that was funny as I had never heard anyone, ever, brag about a writing score on the MCAT.
Oh, and if you had said that you were bullsh-tting I would have been much more impressed than by your "several national awards".
 
Benjo said:
Is this some sort of joke? If it is, then I want to congratulate you on reaching the paramount of bullsh-tting ability, a height to which I aspire on a daily basis.

LMFAO!!!
 
The chair of my premedical committee interview told me that your PS should not have any contractions.
 
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