broimtired
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Background: I wrote a PS, sent it to an admin from my dream MD school, they replied with corrections only to grammar, said it was great overall, and told me to make sure I apply early to their school/let them know if I do. That was last year.
Decided to apply this cycle instead, changed the PS to have more recent experience (kept it mostly the same). The previous admin had left, so I tried the tactic again at different schools. Got two responses from schools in my state. Also had a medstudent friend who works in admissions read the PS. All three have opposite and conflicting feedback:
ex 1: the language/structure you use is too complex vs you write very well and this is what I like to see
ex 2: I like these experiences, expand on them more by removing X part vs these experiences don't tell me a ton, find new ones, or mostly expand on X experience.
Issue: I have made many revisions, but none appease all 3 people. I feel like with each draft, my voice disappears from the narrative more and more, and I feel very conflicted with how to move forward in a way that will appease everyone (which is the goal in this, right). I'm just exhausted.
Decided to apply this cycle instead, changed the PS to have more recent experience (kept it mostly the same). The previous admin had left, so I tried the tactic again at different schools. Got two responses from schools in my state. Also had a medstudent friend who works in admissions read the PS. All three have opposite and conflicting feedback:
ex 1: the language/structure you use is too complex vs you write very well and this is what I like to see
ex 2: I like these experiences, expand on them more by removing X part vs these experiences don't tell me a ton, find new ones, or mostly expand on X experience.
Issue: I have made many revisions, but none appease all 3 people. I feel like with each draft, my voice disappears from the narrative more and more, and I feel very conflicted with how to move forward in a way that will appease everyone (which is the goal in this, right). I'm just exhausted.