What are your thoughts?

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"Who ever uttered such a ridiculous thought"

I suggest you read some existential philosophy! Many, my friend, many have uttered such thoughts.
 
tl;dr

You're not going to get very many serious replies here friend.

Hit up your local AA.
 
Assuming this a personal statement...

Delete "pre-med"
Delete "the GPA, the MCAT, the volunteer and shadowing hours, the journal publications, and the whatever-else-can-be-added-to-my-repertoire."

And you're an aspiring pre-med? Why? Just be an aspiring physician.
 
I think your letter of intent is great. 🙄
 
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