Would anyone be able to help read my (almost final) PS?

[medlyfing]

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Hi everyone. I was wondering if anyone would be able to help read through my PS and tell me about general flow, if content is okay, or anything else. Thanks!

 

[Gryffindor20]

I'll take a look if you want.

 

[jsf0120]

Yes

 

[Nontradunderdog]

ill give it a gander if you desire