Would anyone be willing to help me cut some characters from my PS (and give me some tips)?

[deleted674723]

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I'm about 400 characters over and am unsure if my PS is hitting the mark. Anyone got time to take a look?

 

[CellPowerhouse]

Sure, send it over! I'm also an applicant this cycle, but I've submitted my primary already.

 

[deleted674723]

Just sent you a PM!

 

[athlete421]

looks like you already got someone, but i'd be happy to help if a second opinion is needed on what to cut out

 

[Mr. Beefy Lion]

I'll take a look if you send it to me in my inbox

 

[Holmwood]

I'm pro at cutting down. I cut my 6500 to a 5000 character. Let me know if you need additional help.