Would anyone be willing to read my personal statement?

[Hilltopper2018]

Hi everyone, I am currently writing and rewriting my personal statement. I am curious if anyone would be willing to give it a read and see if I am heading down the right path. Any suggestions/criticisms are more than welcome. Thanks!

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[Latteandaprayer]

I haven’t applied yet, but I’m an English major and I’ve read tons of essays for other people. Send it my way if you’re comfortable doing that!

 

[Hilltopper2018]

I haven’t applied yet, but I’m an English major and I’ve read tons of essays for other people. Send it my way if you’re comfortable doing that!

Awesome, I PMd you. Thanks in advance!

 

[MonkeyArrow]

If you require another set of eyes, PM me and I will take a look.

 

[Hilltopper2018]

If you require another set of eyes, PM me and I will take a look.

Yes I would love to have another set of eyes look it over. I am working on it now but will PM it to you at some point later today. Thank you!

 

[westsidestoryz]

ill read it!

 

[goldfish808]

I'll take a look.

 

[LoveBeingHuman:)]

Sure!

 

[wyqgerman]

I would love to look at it and offer some advices. PM me!

 

[westsidestoryz]

He gone man....he gone