Would someone review my personal statement

[mark1989]

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Looking for someone to review my personal statement and help get it down to 4500 characters for aacomas. Tried the reader list but most of them have filled up inboxes or do not respond. I'm guessing that most of them are MS1 and may be pressed for time these days. Got good help from one of them on content but looking for another opinion as the more the better.

 

[PJ meowerton]

Looking for someone to review my personal statement and help get it down to 4500 characters for aacomas. Tried the reader list but most of them have filled up inboxes or do not respond. I'm guessing that most of them are MS1 and may be pressed for time these days. Got good help from one of them on content but looking for another opinion as the more the better.

Sure, I could, PM me. I'm not the best with grammar but I could comment on content. I won't be able to look at it until tonight though.

 

[Newyorkgiants27]

Would also like some help. Thanks very much.

 

[PJ meowerton]

Would also like some help. Thanks very much.

You can PM me yours if you want, like I said I'm not strong with grammar but I can comment on content/flow

 

[DrNunes]

I can take a look at your personal statement if you like. Can look at it over the weekend. My degree was writing and literature heavy so I'm pretty decent at it. PM me if you want me to help out.

 

[EgyptianDoc]

I was a successful applicant. Will be attending MSUCOM next June. I'm willing to read/edit personal statements. Please send your essay as a Word document if you want me to edit. I will assume you don't want me to edit if you PM me a copy/paste.