Can someone review my Letter of Intent?

[pre-spring]

The title. Basically wrote a letter of intent to the top choice medical school I interviewed at and need someone to review it. It has been a month since the interview and I'll probably hear back like mid February or around there.

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[GoSpursGo]

Not gonna review in detail. But for these things I always preach brevity, 3-5 sentences max. A little bit about why they are the best fit for you. A little bit about how you will be a good fit for them. A promise to attend if accepted.

Don't make them re-read your entire application. They already have that.

 

[pre-spring]

Not gonna review in detail. But for these things I always preach brevity, 3-5 sentences max. A little bit about why they are the best fit for you. A little bit about how you will be a good fit for them. A promise to attend if accepted.

Don't make them re-read your entire application. They already have that.

Okay great!! Thank you. Is it fine to include any updates if I have them?

 

[GoSpursGo]

Okay great!! Thank you. Is it fine to include any updates if I have them?

One more sentence for the most meaningful updates