i'm undergrad just to let you know.
this is my first time getting an appeal and my gpa wasnt the best in the past because of my living situation with my mother; alot of drama at home, worrying how i will get to school, everyday it was something. i moved to an on-campus apartment in august 2011 and my grades have improved since then because i'm able to focus on my studies while not worrying about problems at home and how i will get to school.
thats what i put on the form as well.
Ok. Well, let's start at the beginning. First off: Let's add some correct punctuation and capitalization.
" This is my first time getting an appeal and my GPA wasn't the best in the past because of my living situation with my mother; a lot of drama at home, worrying how I will get to school, everyday it was something. I moved to an on-campus apartment in August 2011 and my grades have improved since then because I'm able to focus on my studies while not worrying about problems at home and how I will get to school. "
oook....well, now I can kinda of read it....let's try to put in some complete sentences....
"This is my first time getting an appeal and my GPA wasn't the best in the past because of my living situation with my mother. I had a lot of drama at home, due to worrying how I will get to school. Everyday, it was something. I moved to an on-campus apartment in August 2011 and my grades have improved since then. I'm able to focus on my studies while not worrying about problems at home and how I will get to school."
ok....getting closer. I think we are up to a 2nd or 3rd grade reading level. Let's continue....(we might even throw in some big words this time)
[hmm....we can leave out the first sentence since it doesn't matter.] [Wait. Don't need the second 'sentence' either] [Nope. 3rd is useless.]
"Since receiving my academic probation, I have made significant changes in life in order to improve my GPA and return to good academic standing. As seen in my most recent transcript, I have shown improvement and I will continue to do so in the future. I request that my academic probation be removed."
Not that hard. It all starts with a little correct capitalization.
Sometimes, I think that current members of this forum make up these people just to entertain us. For the sake of my hope in humanity, please lie to me and tell me they do.