Is this a good thesis?

vazio12

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Sorry if this might be slightly of topic of sdn.

This is my thesis for a class. We have to write a paper on social media based of some articles.

"Social media has allowed us to expand our average proximity of normal face-to-face interaction through interfaces such as Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram. However, efficient as social media may be, it comes with a price, privacy."

Is this okay? Too long?

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