Admission Essay Critiques and Feedback

[Hopeful0330]

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Hi,

I am finishing up my personal statement for a Nursing School admission and would love to get some critiques and feedback on how to strengthen my personal statement (be as brutal as possible). I'm conflicted with my personal statement because the more I read it I feel that it is either too personal or too cliché. I can PM you my Personal Statement if you'd like to read it.

If you do decide to read it thank you so much!

 

[Forever Geebs]

Hi,

I am finishing up my personal statement for a Nursing School admission and would love to get some critiques and feedback on how to strengthen my personal statement (be as brutal as possible). I'm conflicted with my personal statement because the more I read it I feel that it is either too personal or too cliché. I can PM you my Personal Statement if you'd like to read it.

If you do decide to read it thank you so much!

This isn't a nursing school forum. Have you tried posting there?

 

[pms_testosterone]

Sure, I can read it!

 

[Forever Geebs]

Sure, I can read it!

Just an FYI that the PS is for nursing, not med, school.