Advice on my personal statement

[joshwake]

I am looking for input anywhere I can get it. If anyone would like to give me some advice or simply provide an opinion please post and I will send you my personal statement. Thanks in advance!

 

[bing12]

sent it over, and again i would like to add that my grammar and writing is not good.. I will only comment on the ideas you have written.

 

[ilikepancakes]

i can look at it also

 

[amalgamgrillz]

Feel free to PM it to me if you still need more feedback. I'll mainly focus on grammar and overall essay structure.

I've edited 35+ personal statements on SDN, so I can definitely give you an idea about where you stand in terms of originality (amongst the limited pool of essays I've seen).

 

[DMDRAJ]

I can take a look and give you feedback

 

[orchid1980]

I can take a look too 🙂

 

[zombieboi1]

I can take a look too 🙂

You about 5 years too late