Hi guys, I am a re-applicant this year and one of my goals is to improve my personal statement. Does anybody out there willing to share an example of some good personal statements ??? I am having trouble trying to figure out how personal it needs to be to be interesting but also balancing it with talking about some of my achievements. I would really love to ready some great PS out there. Also, if anyone doesn't mind critiquing my statements as it is right now that would be great too !!!