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I recently received some feedback on my personal statement, and one of the comments I got was that I really had to make my reader "feel" like they were there and experiencing what I was going through.
One major experience I talk about is the time when I had to undergo surgery for an acute condition (nothing chronic), but my editor wanted me to write about it like I was literally dying/breathing my last breath. I couldn't help but roll my eyes when I read the example they gave. I honestly hate over-exaggerating, but this is a tip that I've received from 2 different editors who've been accepted to top med schools. Do adcoms seriously love stuff like this?
One major experience I talk about is the time when I had to undergo surgery for an acute condition (nothing chronic), but my editor wanted me to write about it like I was literally dying/breathing my last breath. I couldn't help but roll my eyes when I read the example they gave. I honestly hate over-exaggerating, but this is a tip that I've received from 2 different editors who've been accepted to top med schools. Do adcoms seriously love stuff like this?